You have given promise a character for the reader to see how its very name can inspire things and at the same time break itself bringing grief. I also liked the tone of longing within it too..excellent.

I agree that the tone here is excellent. You have not only personified promises you have truly made them seem human. Cause we all have good and bad just like promises, they give us hope and they destroy us at the same time. I think the style you chose for this also helped bring the piece to life especially alongside the use of older styled English. Wonderful write

People promise and break them I love this poem Saffie5/5

-Bet

5/5.Wonderfully personified promises.Though they are broken still they are missed.

Loved the tone.