Star Light

by Andrew   Jul 30, 2014


Star light star bright
How alone I feel tonight
Sitting under your light
My heart is in a plight

A feeling of forlorn
My heart is being torn
Under your same light
My darling sits tonight

So far away you are
She also sits to far
She gazes up to you
And that makes me so blue

I am wanting and longing
For our hearts to be singing
Side by side we can sit
Our hands entangled in a perfect fit

To be in life as one
My sorry will be gone
My life would be whole
To love her with all my soul

Both together
Forever
To gaze at you light
My life is now so bright

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  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Cute. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    The rhyming was adorable but to me if you had done away with the rhyming (not that's it's not beautiful) would've been so much better because with rhyming you have to watch out for things that rhyme and doing that you limit your ability to make it shine like I know ANY poem can shine :) that's my small critique enjoy your day :)

    -Bet