Comments : What is the Matter with Gravity?

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh my gosh.... I love this poem.... This poem has such a deep meaning.... Each and every line has a depth in it which needs to be understood by each and every one of us....
    What I understood from this poem :
    In the beginning matter hates gravity as our is keeping it bound and not allowing it to be free. He feels that gravity is traping it on this land.. Taking away all it's freedom and not allowing it to pursue its dreams, reach its dreams.
    Although gravity explains him that he will get destroyed if he let's it go, matter just does not understand. In the end you tell us that just like how matter does not understand gravity we too blame many of nature's designs and find them as restrictive and obstructing.

    This poem is to good. The way you have written it is also remarkable. How in the starting two lines of each verse you describe their feelings and in the next two lines a conversation between them.......
    Even the title of this poem is very catch. It attached me towards it like gravity.
    Well.... This poem goes in my favorite list.

    Wonderfully written. Keep writing and thank you for sharing

    • 9 years ago

      by Lemon Squeezy

      I thank You for your kind words about this piece. I have always been a fan of science and nature. I appreciate your thoughts and am happy I could inspire someone with my work.

  • 9 years ago

    by kjforce

    LS...loved the verbal matter vs gravity
    " backatcha ".game...very unique and creative...kudos...kj