Comments : Like Leaves In Oaks (Rondeau)

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.An excellent write.Beautiful message for humans to contemplate the meaning of life from nature.

    At last, I'll decompose and all
    ...............Like leaves in oaks.

    Very touching but so true.

    from branches short or tall
    sounds better

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Hi alka, thank you for the suggestion

      Though I can't change it. Each line in this poem has a set number of syllables, eight syllables in each line. If I change it, it will not work with the rest of the poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Thank you for making me aware .Have to learn a lot.

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Like leaves in oaks, I'll learn to fall

    This is one of the best beginning that I've come across in a long time & here on poetic journey begins.

    Awesome.

    all the best & take care