Comments : Arachnephobia

  • 9 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I think most of the human population are afraid of spiders, just saying....

    One thing is for sure, I completely love how you described how being covered in them made you feel. I, as the reader, could feel the sensation of them crawling all over me ( didn't like that feeling too well ) and it was completely awesome.

    Try reading this aloud to yourself, see ths difference than when you read in your head. Good job.