Comments : My Beating Heart (Pregnancy Loss)

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    First time mothers heart

    I was criticized about misplacing an apostrophe
    to be honest I read this more than once to connect all four words but I still await a second opinion on weather an apostrophe at the end on mothers' would keep the readers from distraction

    beautiful poem btw

  • 9 years ago

    by mikaylar

    I think it's fine... Might need a little bit of emotion added to it... And som more adjoining words but I think it's good