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by Michael D Nalley
First time mothers heart
I was criticized about misplacing an apostrophe
to be honest I read this more than once to connect all four words but I still await a second opinion on weather an apostrophe at the end on mothers' would keep the readers from distraction
beautiful poem btw
I think it's fine... Might need a little bit of emotion added to it... And som more adjoining words but I think it's good