Though you were the one
by Remy bailey Sep 17, 2014
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Wen I'm wit you you make my heart smile I know we only been kicking it for awhile but wen I'm wit u I can't imagine another day wit out you some how I felled for u but u were not there catch me I often wonder WATS happening to me then i realize I'm falling deep for u am i wrong for wanting to hold on am I wrong for trying hold on wen my mind telling me Ur so wrong am I wrong for not wanting to be alone would I be wrong to give up so easily would I be wrong to move on nothing seem right anymore the though of being alone at night seems like one big fright being with you these last couple months been o so right I though I found Mr right I found out I was right just Ur not my Mr right |
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9 years agoby Lune de ma vie
Strong flow, nice rhyming sequences throughout it.
Again I'd break up the stanza's but other than that it's a beautifully worded poem that is real cute.
You can see how much you care for this person, it totally shows in the words you have used here to express your feelings for them.-
9 years ago
by Remy bailey
Thank you I appreciate the advise also you reading my poem and I do really care for him,when I write poems it helps me when I'm sad .
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