by Augastus Black
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This poem is just Unique....wow..Nicely written with full care and respected words. It teaches us that life is beautiful....everyone should enjoy living it. You are on your way of becoming a great poet. |
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Thank you so much :-) although I must say, that's the funny thing with poetry, people often have many different interpretations, when I wrote this I was actually very depressed and was being sarcastic about life, it was more a cynical poem than a poem about life's beauty :-) |
by Ben Pickard
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Got to be honest, I saw the sarcasm inherent throughout! Very good piece about the hardships of simply living |