Comments : Day and night

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Beautiful and artistic poem.
    I loved the rhythm of it and the words which you used.
    The way you molded the words together to place a beautiful ad vivid display of imagery was breathtaking.
    The metaphors which you used were well placed and easily able to imagine within the readers minds.
    Lovely write, very enjoyable and emotionally deep.
    5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you so much lune de ma vie,I really really appreciate it, it's comments like this that uplift me and inspire me to keep on writing :-)