Comments : Fallen angel, shattered glass

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You have a gift Hazel of letting your emotions flow and as we talked about erlier, the nature tones in your poem are breathtaking....

    love this line:

    One day I'll see your face, another stranger, in another place. ---- sighs... I can relate to this line.... very heart gripping...

    very pretty piece!!!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you Andrea :-) this is a poem I wrote about someone very very special who broke my heart spirits and soul,yet somehow managed to fix them up again...

      PS sorry about the belated response,my mind has been all over the past few weeks :-P

  • 9 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Thanks for such a beautiful and emotional poem. it explains how i feel very well at the moment. the flow is great. keep it up

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you Sarah,I appreciate that a lot, stay strong honey and keep writing, also may I just make a suggestion?I think that your poem"child abuse"should rather go under explicit,as it deals with sensitive subject matter,I must say that it was a shockingly beautiful poem, and that I can relate in part, though not entirely, ti the events that occurred, also if you don't mind my asking, is it a personal, experienced poem or just a random poem?