I love the way you have written your poem. It's beautiful.
Using the same words such as rhythm... Music... Beat. Song.... Adds to the beauty of the poem. It does make it look like a song.

Well written.

Oh Jacquie, this poem is so incredible, the imagery and emotions that you've created and evoked with your words is so vivid and just, stunning!!! PS friend, you should really join the group chats once in a while, Andrew (masked metaphor) even wrote you a nice little welcome note on my request :-P