Comments : A Truly Happy Poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Karan Patade

    Its stated to be a happy poem and yet I quite take to the undertones of gloom. Love the last 4 lines!!

    Great work :)

    • 9 years ago

      by vengi57

      Thank you for taking the time to read this. It was quite a challenge to write something mote light hearted than my normal works but I'm glad you like the results.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Jacquie this is gorgeous and adorable!!!! What a fun and light hearted poem,I have one query, but I think I'd rather post it on the pm he he :-) great job honey <3 ha ha well um...its to do with art, so I don't think it would be appropriate to ask it in public ha ha, also, if my parents go to Bible study on Wednesday you wanna come over for a while? :-)

    • 9 years ago

      by vengi57

      Yaaaay thank you. Also, sure ask whatever you wish :p

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Ok so here's the question...is your reference to art in the literal or metaphorical sense in the poem? Ha ha me and my quizzical mind :-)