by Karan Patade
Its stated to be a happy poem and yet I quite take to the undertones of gloom. Love the last 4 lines!! |
by vengi57
Thank you for taking the time to read this. It was quite a challenge to write something mote light hearted than my normal works but I'm glad you like the results. |
Jacquie this is gorgeous and adorable!!!! What a fun and light hearted poem,I have one query, but I think I'd rather post it on the pm he he :-) great job honey <3 ha ha well um...its to do with art, so I don't think it would be appropriate to ask it in public ha ha, also, if my parents go to Bible study on Wednesday you wanna come over for a while? :-) |
by vengi57
Yaaaay thank you. Also, sure ask whatever you wish :p |
Ok so here's the question...is your reference to art in the literal or metaphorical sense in the poem? Ha ha me and my quizzical mind :-) |