Comments : All-occasion flowers

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    OH MY GOD!
    I can't believe you did not, and this did not,
    come to our attention before.

    The poem is outstanding Zahraa! The imagery, the feelings and emotions. Very endearing, very captivating and touching.

    It was mind taking starting from the very 1st few words,
    things are never how they are promised, and sometimes what we are promised lacks a certain truth...there will always be a different side for everything and every story in life.

    Especially when it comes to love.

    I just can't believe how beautifully you managed to connect different types of flowers and roses with certain tokens, that meant something for you.

    And then how touching and sad you state and give up somehow on the hopeful tone you used in the previous stanza.

    I am adding this to my favorite, and I am really disappiinted this was not highlighted earlier.

    Very touching