Comments : To a Loved One

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I would say this is a sonnet as it has 14 lines, but im not exactly sure. What i am sure is that at least to me , this piece creates a melancholic atmosphere. It tells a tale of a loved one who now rests in peace, and what was left behind by them, just the memories. It has a realistic view. in the sense that the loved one may not be present in body but at least is present in the memories and in dreams. one can still feel them near. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Adorable read, smooth rhyme, delicate content and word choice, this is almost flawless, thank you very much for sharing.
    I will keep visiting your page.