Crystal, This is outstanding and the story you tell is vivid and detailed, even though most wont read this for its length, I freaking love this poem from you. I didn't see anything wrong with it in technical terms. It is difficult to over come your fears of and it was fate that pushed you to that Saturday supermarket to see a person you knew from a year ago, and you are grateful to see this person again. It seems here you play the "what if" game, and what if you didn't go to the supermarket with a friend, how much things would turn out differently for you on that day, would you still be depressed or overcome by anxiety? Its interesting to see your thoughts about this because mental health does cause you to overthink. Love this. 5/5

Damn why didn't i see this when i could nominate it :/

you have a wonderful way of writing anf this rough draft" should stay exactly the way it is, I adore the format and your descriptive writing is first class!!! word choice and tempo as usual was awesome but I really like the flow and the narrative quality :)) really a unique write right here :) added to favs so i can indulge at a later date.

A readers request.....DONT Change it!