Breeze

by cianebreezeee   Jan 20, 2015


The crisp air
Savory delight
I smell the ocean
Salty and clear
Breathtaking views
Mountain tops, hidden valleys
I want to run
Be free
Let go
Inspire, imagine, love
But the greatest view

takes my breath away
Out of my grasp
I see you
Handsome, charming
Intelligent, passionate
Your light, your glow
Your freckled cheeks
That wisp of hair I love
Shaking knees
I look at you and
You look at me
You say
AIn't this lovely
I smile, nod
it's beautiful; you
Can see for miles

His touch, smell, sound
I caress this moment
I loved you
Why did she take this
Away from me
I lost you, you lost me
I cried as hard as ocean
Waters
Then I heard a sound
Familiar;
Comforting;
It was a whisper, soft
And subtle
Let go it said be free
Like you said you would

Fly and feel the breeze

And then it was gone
And I thought my life was a crystal stair
But it ain't

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  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Other than the capitalization of each and every line I like the way you set the style up in this piece. I love the feel of the tone here, you definitely captured it well. Very well written and great use of imagery.