Waw, have I mentioned in any of my comments before that your poems could be successful songs ? Some with a fast rap pace!

I really love the morals in these poems, it's very easy to relate to such poem and to take morals from them, to your own personal life.

I found this poem just another powerful piece that hits reality! I really love it all, each part of it, with the ripples of inner rhyme. I was a bit off with little repetitions but they were not very serious.

In all I find your work very praise worthy.
well done!