Comments : Lost Time

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A little slice of life, the simple things that we have and hold brings us a smile and many a thought. I also like the repetition of the line "And with my hand, I played with it." For its kept taking my mind back to the point of origin like it was something important. It seemed like a focal point for the poem.

    I also like how you ended the poem with the opening line:"But I continued walking through the sidewalk" This too brings the reader back to the origin of where it all began. Nicely penned as always dear :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Its very lovely poem,

    i love what every u have written