Beautiful, Robert!

Nice...you are really good with these Sonnets. The rhythm, rhyme and feelings just flow...well penned!

I liked your word choice but there are too many unecessary commas in this poem.

Judging Comment

This is one of the most elegant sonnets I have read in quite some time! Robert has crafted a gem here!

His iambic pentameter is elegant and very rhythmic!

Very magical and spirited, the love and beauty of this woman is felt within the entire piece! Just beautiful!!