Turning back

by aniD   Mar 15, 2015


Deep hallow of emptiness
echoed in the vision of my lens
as i drop a string of memories
where you and i used to dwell in the same place.

you became me
and i became you

i color your cheeks red
paint a smile on your lips

i love you
and you love me too..

but still

a
deep hallow of emptiness
echoed in the vision of my lens
as i drop a string of memories
where you and i used to dwell in the same place.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is lovely but sad. When things don't work out it always gives us doubts about ourselves, I think you portrayed this well.

    Where you and i used to dwell in same place
    ^^
    The only thing I can think of is that this line is missing 'the' between in and same.

    I do like how the first and last stanzas are repeated though as it shows the vicious cycle love can become.
    Em

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