Comments : Orphaned Chrysanthemum

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Your poem depicts your loneliness; an appropriate title Orphan Chrysanthemum.
    One can feel a deep connectivity with the Dandelions and your lost love .
    Beautifully penned Dashiel:)
    Keep writing:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the title for it sets up the reader with the loneliness that is about to unfold. Your poem not only has an imagery the reader can see but also get connected with your feelings...another lovely write.

  • 9 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Can feel the your deep melancholy and the loss that you are feeling,expressed very elegantly...