Comments : 80 mm of Love

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I have to laugh badly at this I didn't expect the ending whatsoever. I was thinking of something else when I read this and the end was an eye opener.

    • 10 years ago

      by John Doe

      Thank you and this one is about the protagonists love for cigarettes(80 mm is the standard size of a cigarette)

  • 10 years ago

    by mazzy star

    Good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Is that truly love? Something to ponder about... When is love an obsession? Rather could one say tht love is an addiction? Or that an obsession and addictions aren't truly love but one can mistaken them and think that are? I enjoyed the read.

    • 10 years ago

      by John Doe

      It all depends on how do you define love!

  • 10 years ago

    by Shruti

    I love the first line.
    Never expected the ending to be like that. Good rhyme and a smooth flow.