Shelley,

This is beautiful.... I have to nominate this!

What a beautiful piece. Excellent written.
Added to my favorite.

I haven't read such simple and beautiful writing about nature in a while.
Enchanting!

I have to admit that I came across your poem after seeing Maple Tree's comment....and she said it perfectly, this IS beautiful, your rhymes flow like glass and don't feel forced at all......a completly natural nature piece :)

5/5 all day long, Nominated.

Well deserved win, congratulations shelley!

So much beauty, in the simplicity of your wording, and the rhyme just added to it. I couldn't help but find myself wrapped up in the flow of this piece, like I was in a twister myself. Great work and congrats on the win!

Weekly contest May 18th
Judging comment:

Excellent word choice and structure, rhyming as smooth as the glass. Somehow the short stanza and non-complicated Imagery fit this category of poems very much. The author knew how to use the title very well coming up with more than beautiful poem.

Judging Comments

Shelley captivate's and radiates true and pure nature within this lovely and elegantly written rhyme scheme.

The flow and rhythm is natural and priceless. The true beauty of nature has been presented by Shelley this week!