I liked the way you wrote it like it had a subject and then you elaborated on each part, no matter that some were the same topic, yet it sounds like a love letter sweet to the soul and somehow on the last stanza it warns that someone not to mess up and I wish I had that ability again because it hurts not having it anymore. You write beautiful love, and don't forget love is a magical thing but like you wrote it takes two people to make it grow 5/5

- Moria Bells Knight -

I am in love with this piece, Ms. Lucero! (: This is sweet and very creative. Wonderful work here! (:

--- MKKK

Wonderful write :)

Judging Comment

This is a graceful, and elegant poem by Everlasting.. how beautiful.. like a song..

the nature tones and romantic messages.. oh mercy, whats NOT to love and admire about this poem, very pretty!