Comments : The Lightning in You and I.

  • 8 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This piece is absolutely beautiful. The words flow so well and it really spoke to me. All of your work inspires me. You go!!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh my...there is a lot in this and so many images and thoughts were hitting me as I read this. Its a self seeking moment of a person in a relationship who is going through or in the process of making some changes. How those changes are going to affect or how it will change that person is what I'm getting from this write. Nonetheless, it has got my attention!

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow Guinea Pig!

    What a great meaningful poem, really going in depth to the though that everything happens for a reason, and that it all means something. I often find myself in that position where I think what if, what if it means this, or is a way of being told this. I like finding reasons for things happening, I think it helps offer closure for a lot of things too.

    Greatly worded as usual!! :)