Comments : A Great Aunt's Comfort

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    As always - this poem was so personal to you, and so moving to read. You really put in so much emotion but also showed us who this person was, and what they meant to you and how they made you feel so special and important, and most of all, understood.

    The wording is perfect, they layout works for the poem.

    The tone of the poem was so hopeful too, it is like she shared with you her thoughts about you and wanted to show you how beautiful you are, and to always be who you are, and then you are now writing this poem for others to know that they should be themselves too, and they are perfect the way they are.

    I really liked how you created the little scene of her releasing all of the darkness from you, that was so powerful.

    Really good job for the contest, and you sure did keep it to the prompt.

    Beautiful poem! xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Ms. Andrea. I'm glad it did well on the contest (: The words are honest and sincere and really did come from the heart. The layout is great. The readers will truly come to know how blesses you are to have your Auntie Elsie (: I love your narration, you are telling many wonderful memories and stories and this world must know. This is such a moving write! Added to favorites (:

    --- MKKK