This is beautiful. I love the honestly in it. The hints of emotions throughout the whole piece. It shows a more intimate part of you, like, a part that maybe you keep to yourself but express through your love and care for your family.

I love how you split it up, how each part is dedicated to different people or ideas. I love your writing and this is a really good one from my perspective.

Not the most grand poem with big fancy words and all those little patterns, but it is personal and heart-felt.

Love it.

Nomitated.

Old bean you still write amazingly, really this is awesome you are so talented at conveying emotion so do me a favour and try not to delete it for a while please!!!!

So lovely
Love it!

Brilliant ! I can relate to this exactly. I am 34, happily married, three children - and they are everything to me. More important than anything. I could not have put it better. 5