Comments : Boom goes the dynamite

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is truly excellent! The imagery and the personification used is superb. I love this one - one of my favourites from you. "Must she really drag her wearied self from the comfort of the moon's embrace" - excellent line!

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you:) it's odd at first I was speaking of myself, then my shadow self, then the moon then the sun, there wasn't really a map I sort of just flowed with the stream