Good flow and idea - I've had the same kind of thoughts myself, frequently!

And artificially twisted I see you are very good at girl.

Man I've been loving your poetry lately.
Interesting to think about though really. Imagine if our poetry or books were found years later, what would people say? It almost makes me more aware of my words, leave them something that brings hope, help the, to relate, give future readers of our lost poetry something to chew on as well.

Hmm you may have sparked an idea in me.