A sad and powerful write. well done.

Sad but beautifully done

It's really lovely, though very sad.
Goodbyes are really painful; but we need to move on.
Stars can't shine without darkness, and same goes for us too.
Very well written.

This is a sad write, there's something about a reluctant goodbye that hits home with me, I'm a big fan of this form, its not easy to get it flowing right and i thought you did a great job with it, your flow and word choice was great :)

"But even though this is our goodbye
I will always remember our hello. "

^^^^^ this is a great line but heartbreaking too :(

Very sad but great Etheree.