Comments : I flicked an ant

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Indeed - and they are so much stronger and better than us in almost every way, relatively! Excellent piece.

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Contrariwise to all expectation, that ant might come back to bite you in the butt.
    Great work!

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      True Larry, luckily only red ants bite over here and they are quite rare these days. thanks for reading.

  • 8 years ago

    by WW

    Awesome! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Z

    This poem is amazing. :). The ending has a beautiful twist as well. It does well to stand out on its own. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I Flicked an Ant*
    Trying to deal with my issues with title capitalization, so not a big deal. However this was a spot one poem. It is easily distinguished, reading through all of the contest nominations, this one in particular had the biggest impact and just got stuck there.

    I found the whole combination really creative and unusual in oneway AND another. Absolutely deep and thoughful wording. I really love this piece of art. It's like a meaningful abstract painting, so much feelings and emotions.

    Well done for writing this, hope to see it on the front page.