Brilliant!

Clever to throw a little bit of loop poetry in there at the end.

love all the magic as well

This is one of those poems I enjoy where we take the stuffy poetry form and rules book and flush it down the bog.

The title was interesting, linked nicely at the end.

good poem

I enjoyed reading this.

The title intrigued me but I must admit when I first started reading the poem I though why what title until I got to the end, nicely linked.

Your flow is good and as Darren said the loop poetry at the end was good.

Em