Comments : An absorbent read... (Senyru)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    HAHAHA Michael - you have it with this one!
    Now I see what you mean by mystery, subtlety, and a great twist at the end......mind you, the toilet bowel is too clean for some of those papers to end their dirty lives!
    All the best Michael,
    Ben
    ps. This is about the funniest poem, long or short, I have read on this site.

    • 10 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Using the title as the fourth line is a subtle way of adding to the restrictive form.

      Mind you paper cuts do sting!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Koan

    Hehehe!!! Dont you just hate it when it happens to you?!?!? haha Thx for the laughs Michael...

  • 10 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This made me giggle