Comments : The Death Of Night

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi Francis and welcome to PNQ.
    This really is a wonderful first post from you, worded beautifully. The rhythm you have achieved here is effortless too.
    Well done - I look forward to reading more of your work
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is well written with a smooth flow that can be read
    effortlessly and at the same time the emotions within is felt...
    Keep penning...take care and Welcome to PNQ.