Love lines

Hi Prince Alexander! (what a great name!)

I like your poem a lot! This is a good piece of writing!

Please forgive me, I added some suggested small changes just to make it flow a little better. Hope you approve.

'Your eyes are tender but your look has tease.
You've been created to beckon, to beckon and please.
You are an earthly creature, but I would sell for you my soul,
And would betray Almighty God, no fear of paying a toll.
My actions are no longer ruled and judged by any reason,
For Love lies high above religion, and worth the blasphemy for treason.'