Mind works lots and yes it does lots of things,
3 years ago
Wow this is fabulous and has a real deep meaning behind it I feel.
Waves of thoughts
Making momentous ripples
Tossing up and down
I like this opening stanza because the use of ripples shows that thoughts are always going in and out of your mind. Great imagery.
Holding the pleasant
Letting go the unpleasant
These lines tell me that there are thoughts you want to hold onto forever but other thoughts you want to let go but it doesn't work like this. We can sometimes forget the good and hold not the bad. I think there is a 'of' missing between go and the though.
Mind-the dream catcher
So powerful to withhold
I love this part because yes, the mind is like a dream catcher it catches all good and bad whether you want it to or not but I believe it's what we do with those thoughts that make us strong.
Bouncing with delight
Wisdom courage compassion
I like the ending because we are our own strength and this shows that no matter what life throws at us we should thrive.