Comments : Caffinate me!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a brilliantly clever little write this is - and the last line was excellent. The taste exhilarates and awakens, and the smell soothes and relaxes. Great imagination throughout this piece. Well done and all the very best

  • 5 years ago

    by Maher

    I laughed at this, but not for the reason you might think. I'm a coffee addict, and this write brilliantly summed up every morning for me before work right after having to lazily wake up at 5.40am, pray (it's a Muslim thing), and then brew my addiction hit. I really liked it - you made my day, even if somewhat indirectly. Thank you :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Dark Secrets

      Yes I know about prayers. I am a Muslim too.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Haha what a way to enjoy this beautiful piece than to read it drinking coffee. Ahh how it awakens every sense :) I'm usually a tea drinker but coffee as become more addictive as the insomnia days take toll.

    Great write, Em

  • 2 years ago


    I don't know how that I missed this one, I believe I wrote a poem about this magic elixir, but forgot the Title. Nice work!