Seems there's hope at the end of the tunnel. One most keep going and move on...

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Hello!

This write is quite delightful containing very sad emotions of love. I like the theme and your expression about your love. I know you Korean people are so good at love stories and other loving stuffs as I have personally understood Korean people with my heart.

I have found an error here -

Today I see he standing,
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Use him instead of he.

At last nice work.

Welcome again to this poetry world.

Have a nice day. Best of luck. I like your name.