I actually really like this, Mark. In truth, I wasn't sure when I first read it, but I appreciate the repetition in the verse which reflects the sorry repetition of destruction that we seem so addicted to.
All the very best and well done on this unique and important piece.
Ben

This is a unique ppiece, das und so true.I love the title you have chosen. You described the destruction of the world and it's keep repeating. enjoyed reading

Loved it

It's an endless correction of wrongs...war is a commodity.