The best i have read today so far, the imagery is great kinda opening my imagination to see the clear picture, though we try to see the best in ourselves, we need to look beyond our noses and see what is beyond our sight.
I enjoyed reading this poem, made me emotional.

This is magical

Very emotional and I felt each and every line.

What an excellent write you have penned here; it has a real voice.
All the best and well done on this,
Ben