Your choice to rhymn gave the poem a pleasant flow. It always give me a sardonic smile to see that 'knife' and 'life' rhymn. -hugs- Silent screams are the worse, because all our energy is lost in something that no one else can hear, lost in something everyone should hear, and missed by the people we need to hear. I thought you had a clever way of incorporating meaningful song titles and lyrics into your work. Thank you for sharing. Know that I heard it. I witnessed it. In reading this, I heard your scream.

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