Comments : Birthdays

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    How nice,

    I wish that on some of my birthdays I was born again
    But seems as if on some of my birthdays I am like
    a fish outside of water, twisting my body, flipping my tail
    over and over gain over a hot sand;just trying to gain some impulse to push myself onto a lake of life...

    But I feel tired instead, and I just stay there not moving... Awaiting for my final breathe

    Then someone comes and gives me a push and I'm there swimming on the lake again, recovering slowly...

    But what a celebration you have on your birthday. I like the images and the alliteration in this piece.