Comments : I pull it out

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The imagery and imagination in this are both horrid and excellent! lol. I enjoyed this thoroughly.
    My only suggestion is "I ripped open my chest" rather than "I rip-opened my chest"

    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

    • 10 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol, thank you Ben.

      Suggestion, taken.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! What a mind bender you have portrayed in this piece.

    Great!
    Take care
    Cindy
    *hugs