Comments : If heaven was a mile away

  • 9 years ago

    by J Nair

    Beautiful !!! Ssenevol

    What metaphors!!

    If honesty was a breath of air
    And love was more than a dare...

    If hope could be a lonely chord
    Played upon the pianoforte
    or sorrow were a tainted window
    through which your heart glowed

    luved this write....

    Indeed --What would i find upon reflection
    Of my deepest core?

    Thanks for sharing Dear!!
    Jay

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hazel,
    Great to see another write from you; you have such a unique style and such a vivid imagination; your work is always refreshing and such a pleasure to read.
    Nominated.
    All the very best and take care,
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Yay thank you so much ben, I've actually become far too accustomed to seeing your lovely comments on my works, sort of a great expectations rerun haha, but it is much appreciated, and quite an honor to have so loyal a follower.

      Take care and hope all is well.

      Hazel.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hazel - I will be sure to damn your work next time, simply to make a point, lol :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This is such a refreshing piece and so imaginative and full of a few of if onlys we can all but dream about.
    Well done

  • 9 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    Wow! a wonder after wonder. Love this peace

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Hehe thanks, thank you so much for all the support <3

  • 9 years ago

    by Maher

    Very beautiful. I love poems that rhyme and carry a good point through strong imagery. This is really nice and I mean that in full honesty.

    Thank you for sharing it with us :)