PRAYERS TO THE RAIN

Hello,

a nice little poem here:

Crystal tears of sky,
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I like the image of rain filled sky. Also the metaphor of big emotion: a sky full of emotion.

Cluster of desolate truth.
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In this sky a loneliness brought on by a revelation. This line is nicely weighted.

Lave drought surrounding the earth;
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Is the word 'Lave' a typo for 'Love'? If so the idea of this desolate raw emotion is starving the emotion of love, preventing it from being released.

Drench me by your catharsis.
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A lovely last line. A plea to the heavens to purge this pity with cleansing rain.

Well done an enjoyable read.

Take care,

Michael