Darren - a wonderful write and very well done!
All the best,
Ben

Hello Darren,

A wonderful poem with vivid descriptions of the desperation for continued life.

Its message is brilliant. We are (in the great scheme of things) insignificant, invisible, a mere food for worms... Still, if we can pass on more than the food from our bones and achieve even a tinge of enduring greatness: our stamp on this world will perhaps be eternal and truly significant, bright as that sun we reach high for!

Well done Darren. A significant piece indeed.

Take care,

Michael

A great poem as always.

I loved this when I first read it in the contest and am proud to say it gained a vote from me.
Very well done on a great write. :)

Just to let you know this is nominated Darren - it deserves the front page in my humble opinion.
All the best,
Ben

A well written thought provoking piece Darren.
I enjoyed reading this, albeit now with thoughts contemplating my eventual demise inside a worm!
Well penned my friend!

You rocked this

You rocked this

Congratulations on winning the challenge! I feel like a teacher saying "great job" but it was indeed. No bones about it. I agree with Ben, definitely front page worthy.

Wonderful stuff, here Darren. You truly deserved the win.

Congratulations on your win
Take care
Cindy

Hello Darren,

well done on your win.

Take care,

Michael

Well done, Darren - a deserved win.
All the best,
Ben

Thanks everyone. Really chuffed with the win.

Judging comment

I feel that everyone has felt like a dying plant within our lifetime, however the way that Darren so powerfully expressed just blew me away.

The metaphoric tones and heartfelt feelings are meshed very well within this piece. I was clearly blown away, excellent write by Darren!

Amazingly beautiful

Well deserved win Darren! Well penned!
PP

This is amazing. Fab write.

We are all heading the same way. Em

This is perfectly done