"You weep as you board the train that takes you back to the farm where you plan to remain with your memories in your mind as a crimson stain."
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One of the best lines I've read from you Ken - excellent stuff.

Well done on another thought-provoking piece and all the best,
Ben

Thanks Ben!

This is an excellent piece Ken. Add to my favorite
All the best

Thanks my friend Dag!

Ken,

This is a wonderful and powerful piece. It flows well with the rhyming. The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed.

Em

Ken,

This is a wonderful and powerful piece. It flows well with the rhyming. The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed.

Em

Thanks all!