So sorry you had to go through this :(

Keep your head up. "Unfit" is such a strong word and I hope you take care of yourself. My heart goes out to you. You are loved!

Keep writing and welcome to PnQ, too!

Hello Judy and welcome to the site.

A good write here with the difficult abab rhyme structure - it really is never easy to achieve without coming off as forced and you do it well here.
Good to see some new talent join the site!
All the very best,
Ben

A very good unforced abab rhythm throughout with a good flow

Written well. Welcome to p&q.

Em