Hello Tess and welcome to the site.

This poem brings back many memories for me; staring at the pretty girls in class was ever more interesting than the work!
This has a nice rhyme scheme that shows real promise for one so young.
Well done, keep writing and all the best,
Ben

What a delightful and romantic poem

Oh to be that girl again looking for the 'eye candy' haha brought back memories. A nice romantic poem.

The 3rd stanza reads: 'When our eyes met for just for a short time, my face turned beet red.' I feel it would read better 'when our eyes met for that short time, my face turned beetroot red'

Oh to be that girl again looking for the 'eye candy' haha brought back memories. A nice romantic poem.

The 3rd stanza reads: 'When our eyes met for just for a short time, my face turned beet red.' I feel it would read better 'when our eyes met for that short time, my face turned beetroot red'