Nicely written, with a fluid rhyme scheme which makes this meaningful poem very easy and pleasant to read. Funny, this poem tickled my memory somehow........:)

*I think you left out an 'h' in the title! Just go into "my poems" on the right of your screen and there'll be an edit option.

Love Ben

A well written poem. Each time I read it I see a bit more of the person

Wow very powerful.

Love the sharp rhyme and flow. It sets the poem nicely.

Em